Ouch! How the thorns of life impress their mark;
Impacting like a traitor in the dark!
A bleeding wound that never seems to heal;
With all the replays, blood cannot congeal.
Too overwhelmed, forgetful in the pain..;
Take heart! The roses always bloom again!
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I’ve come to enjoy this, the Quadrille at
dVerse,
where Björn is hosting, and today’s word is “rose”!
Rhyme and meter, in 44 words. Wonderful.
So well done! I don’t always find it so easy to write rhyming poetry – you nailed it!
Beautiful piece! 🙂
Not often that we see the marriage of 44 words and perfect form. Bravo!
Lovely piece. Yes, roses do eventually bloom again.