A pattering, sprinkling drizzle at first,
Becoming a torrent, a downpour that burst
From clouds of the fluffiest, puffiest kind,
Restoring my body, renewing my mind;
My heart, an oasis, is blessed from above,
To blossom and grow in the rain of your love.
—
A Quadrille for NaPoWriMo day 10, in response to the “drizzle” prompt from Mish at
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Beautiful specially these lines:
My heart, an oasis, is blessed from above,
To blossom and grow in the rain of your love.
Very nice meter and rhyme with a positive approach to rain as restoring, renewing and blessing whether metaphorical or real rain.
Love, ‘rain of your love.’
Nice, clean poem. It runs clean, deep, and fine. An excellent piece to the prompt. Thank you.
A refreshing Quadrille, Crystal, from the sprinkling drizzle to the downpour!.
You’re rhyme and meter are flawless.
A delightful poem! It flows beautifully and the rhymes are natural, not forced 🙂
Oh, how I love this. The rhythm and rhyme are soothing.
I like the way the rain crescendos. The last two lines are especially beautiful.