Fire! Fire! Fear and ire.
Flaming, flaming fuels desire.
Feeling, feeling fresh, inspired.
Fire! Fire! Force conspires.
Fight! Fight! Oh forget it.
Fleeing, fleeing… Might regret it.
Freeing, Freeing if you let it.
Fight! Fight! Come and get it.
Fire! Fire! Passion set it.
—
Quadrille in response to De’s “fire” prompt at
dVerse.
Oh I really love the rhythm and the rhymes… truly a good description of passion
What he said. Almost sounds like an incantation.
Love the rhythm and rhyme of this, Crystal. It describes perfectly the passion for writing, for me.
Like a strong heartbeat, this pounds with desire…renewed.
Nice linking of fire to fight, force, feeling, flaming, fleeing, forgetting and freeing.
Sounds like a spell – lovely rhythm.
Alliteration bliss….but also the rhythm and rhyme makes this a treat to read aloud.