O come and look right through my skin
With eyes of otherworldly grace;
You’ll see our Essence in this face,
Inviting you to look within!
Kaleidoscope of time and place
Where future, past and present curl.
It’s yours and mine. Just give a whirl!
Let’s move beyond our circumstance!
Uncomfortable, yet here’s a chance
To let our tenderness unfurl!
—
Written for
Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge Prompt No. 45: (WHIRL) in the C rhyme line,
#Threethingschallenge #512,
and
#SixSentenceStories: Kaleidoscope.
Mystical Strings 
Love the positivity and challenge in this piece and these 2 lines in particular:
“Kaleidoscope of time and place
Where future, past and present curl.”
Great job utilizing multiple prompts!
I love the beauty of this piece and the way you make your words glide off the page.
Nicely done! 🙂
I like how ‘time and space’ is the kaleidoscope, and the image of tenderness unfurling in a time of un-comfort.
Wow, I love this–5-Star talent to combine the prompts and form, very impressive!
Nice!*
*high compliment from one who stands in awe of those who fashion words in poetic form
Where future, past and present curl. GREAT line!
That’s a well done prompt combo!
Well done!
I struggled with this Decima prompt; I love how you managed to weave in the six sentence prompt to produce a mesmerising poem.